DERRICK
Overall, his research was good and his ideas were different and they were backed up with some youtube links. He seems passionate about the street dance idea and i think the concept would work well for a documentary as street dance is a subject that isn’t really documented on. However, there was too much text and i think more visuals were needed especially for something like streetdance.
CLAIRE
Claire had a good use of statistics to back up her idea on National Identity. The brief storyboard went well as it showed us what angles she would want to use and how it would communicate to the audience. She had good interaction with the class and she didn’t just read from the board, she explained her point throughout her presentation. However, she needed to include her target audience.
COLLEEN
Overall she had good research and you could tell that she knew about the subject well in order to explain it the way she did. The use of youtube links were good as she showed us how she would want her interview footage to look like, and that gave me an image on how she would do it. However, she just needs to focus on one aspect of feminism and research on that so it could fit into 5 minutes, as feminism is such a broad subject.
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